Hello guys! Today i finished making this postcard, so yesterday we were working on this postcard and writing what we did in the holidays, if you've seen the Make it Personal blog you will know about this. So we did a fake Street name, City, and Number because it wouldn't be safe if we posted it with the real information.
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, July 30, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Katrina,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your postcard. It sounded like you had a wonderful time at the pool. Next time when you are writing and using "I" in your sentence, it needs to be capitalised. I wonder why we have to do that in our writing?
Great work Katrina, keep it up!
Ms Lap